Carlson's Milk was an interesting story. Written in 1st person narrative, it tells the story of fatherhood. We get insight in the father's love for his children and also his insecurities. The story immediately dives into the plot, beginning with what is plaguing the father's mind; fingerprinting his children. However, it is obviously not the fingerprinting itself that he is against but the idea of having to face what would happen if they ever needed to use them; he finally would exlaim to his wife that it was because "they were used to identify dead bodies."
Carlson took his father character through several scenes and aspects of life in order to portray more and more of the father's inner fear of his children being missing. The title, "Milk," alludes to the milk carton in the family's refrigerator, which had photos of missing children on the back. The father's reaction to these pictures gives us a sense of how the whole situation is really affecting him, that it's not something trivial but something deeper going on within him. He begins to see "missing persons" everywhere, and since the story is in 1st person, we, as reader, are permitted to hear his thoughts and begin to understand how it is haunting him and empathize with his struggle. If Carlson would have written it any other way, it would not have had nearly the same effect.
When he takes the twins at the end, without telling his wife or his mother, and the whole scene about "Namma" and the Lion King song, really portrays the love he has for his children, and how that love can lead to a crippling, unrelentless fear of losing them..
Tuesday, February 17, 2009
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Nice analysis, do you think that this father might be a little crazy? It seems like he has irrational paranoia to me.
ReplyDeleteI don't have first hand experience with having kids, but I can imagine this "paranoia" referenced above might be natural. no one wants to think about bad things ever happening to loved ones, especially children.
ReplyDeleteReally really well written analysis, man.
ReplyDeleteWhen the father was having trouble with the idea of fingerprinting his children, I thought back to when I got my driver's license. You're given the option of being an organ donor and it wasn't until I got asked that question that I really thought about the terrible possibilities of having to actually be one.
This was great. I agree with you. This story really made me understand what the father was feeling, and also made me terribly sad for him when he got home to find that his wife and mother had went behind his back to do the thing that he, more than anything, wanted to avoid.
ReplyDeleteGood analysis. While I was reading this story, I found myself asking the question, is fingerprinting your children really that big of a deal. There were times I agreed with the father, but there were also times were I felt that he was being irrational and just plain dumb. I wonder...
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